強有力的動詞

	日期	主題	點閱率
	[2010/02/06]	Create Strong Verbs

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Create Strong Verbs
強有力的動詞

使用動詞使句子意念表現的更清晰，有些動詞則無法有力闡示一個動作，如 is、are、was、were、has、give、make、come，還有take等都屬此類。
作者應使用強有力的動詞來指明一個清楚的行為。
範例一
- Original
  A significant decline in the investment return occurred.
- Revised
  The investment return significantly declined.
範例二
- Original
  Significant enhancement of conventional procedures by the proposed scheme is possible through the close monitoring of current conditions.
- Revised
  The proposed scheme can significantly enhance conventional procedures by closely monitoring current conditions.

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