英文信函:Exercise 240
Reporting the current status of related activities國內相關成果說明
1.19
Reporting the current status of related activities
Dear Mr. Jones,
Acknowledgement of previous correspondence
Your fax, dated
February 18, regarding your concern about waste exchange and recycling,
was much appreciated. As per your request, I would like to briefly
describe some of the waste exchange and recycling activities currently
underway in Taiwan, R.O.C.
Program background
The ROC's waste exchange
and recycling program was adapted from the system used in the United
States and was put into effect in January of 1988. Initial activities
included the establishment of a computerized data file. A bimonthly
publication, "Waste Exchange Information, was also founded. This publication
not only makes public waste information provided by the industrial
sector, but also features the abstracts of recent recycling technology
developments in Taiwan. Enclosed please find a copy for your reference.
Challenges in implementing program
The
industrial sector in Taiwan has undertaken many waste exchange projects
in the last couple of years. However, some obstacles persist, owing
to the fact that R.O.C. environmental laws and regulations are still
under codification. Furthermore, the amount of personnel available
to enforce such laws and regulations is insufficient. Promoting the
concept that "waste exchange is one of the best choices for waste
management" is of priority concern to us. Promotion of this concept
will hopefully materialize into meaningful recycle/reuse and pollution
abatement practices. Ms. Lin, the current project leader in this area,
can provide you with further details.
Current activities
I should also tell
you that the EPA of the R.O.C. is currently promoting a "Cherish the
Land" project that is aimed at establishing a recovery/treatment system
for 17 types of wastes. At present, wastes dealt with are PET bottles
and discarded tires. You can contact Mr. Lin, Director of the Fourth
Division, the Bureau of Solid Waste Control, EPA, R.O.C. (1, Hsiang-Yang
Road., Taipei) for further details.
Also, the Industrial Development Bureau of the Ministry of Economic
Affairs (MOEA) has been quite successful in assisting the industrial
sector develop better waste minimization practices. Mr. Lee, Deputy
Chief of the Seventh Division of the Industrial Development Bureau
of the MOEA in Taipei, can clarify any questions you might have regarding
these activities.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if I can be of any further assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Writing exercise
Describing organizational activity.
Using 1.19 as a model, write a letter describing a current organizational
activity. Be sure to adhere to the following guidelines:
- Comment on the inquirer's inteest
in the activity and/or objectives that your two organizations
share.
- Describe any major developments or
milestones in the promotion of the activity, e.g. data bank, newsletter,
programs. Be sure to include the objectives of such activities
or programs.
- Include the names and curriculum
vitae of people who can provide further information.
1.20
Reporting the current status of related activities (shorter version
of 1.19)
Dear Ms. Smith,
Your fax dated March 7 was received with much appreciation. Regarding
your information on item 4 of the fax, I would like to introduce waste
exchange activities in Taiwan, R.O.C.
Background of activities
The waste exchange information services
in Taiwan were first offered in 1988 (Please refer to the program
of the Fifth North American Waste Exchange Conference). The majority
of funding initially came from governmental agencies; the industrial
sector contributed only a small portion. These information exchange
services have continued to gain respect in the industrial sector.
Difficulties encountered
However, local
industry was cautious about waste recycling practices, since (a) the
codification of environmental laws and regulations in Taiwan had not
been fully developed, and (b) the related environmental enterprises
(e.g., treatment/storage/disposal facilities and landfill sites) were
not quite ready.
Current strategy
Because environmental
regulations are increasingly stricter, the government has actively
promoted industrial waste minimization; we expect the local industrial
sector to undertake such practices to a larger extent in the near
future.
Information request
The Taiwan Waste
Exchange Center is particularly interested in acquiring more information
about the various management system models of waste exchange, as well
as the recycling regulations of other countries. Information regarding
successful cases of waste exchange and recycling is also of priority
concern.
Please feel free to let me know if I can be of further assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Writing exercise
Reporting current activities.
Using 1.20 as a model, write a letter reporting the current status
of an activity your organization is involved with. Be sure to adhere
to the following guidelines:
- Briefly describe the background of
this activity with respect to the difficulties encountered in
developing such an activity.
- Propose the solutions or steps to
be taken to eliminate/alleviate such difficulties.
- State your organization's need to
upgrade the level of this activity.
1.21
Reporting the current status of related activities
Dear Mr. Thompson,
Thank you for your inquiry into the current status of ozone layer
protection efforts in Taiwan. I would like to briefly describe some
of the related activities undertaken by our organization, the Industrial
Technology Research Institute (ITRI).
Organizational background
ITRI is a non-proft research and
development institute funded primarily by government and industry.
Governmental funding is used to develop and perform national mid-
to long-term application/research programs, as well as to assist medium
and small-sized enterprises. On the other hand, private (industrial)
funding is invested in jointly cooperative projects and technical
assistance.
Governmental relations
In light of the
importance of protecting the ozone layer and of the need to alleviate
the possible economic impacts of CFC phaseout, the government of the
Republic of China has assigned ITRI to conduct a long term project
to research application technologies that have been implemented to
protect the ozone layer since 1988.
Previous efforts in the area of concern
During the past five
years, ITRI has published a monthly CFC Newsletter, five volumes of
a "Handbook on CFC Utilization," and more than twenty special investigation
reports, so as to provide local industries with updated information
on alternative technologies. More than twenty seminars on technology
development have also been organized by ITRI to assist domestic industries
alleviate CFC problems.
ITRI also continuously visits hundreds of industries to collect information
on the current status of CFCs and the major obstacles we will face
in the future. ITRI also provides promotion and other services related
to the reduction and recovery of CFCs and the use of new alternative
technologies.
Technological developments
Major
achievements attained so far include the following:
- Refrigerants
A. Development of a CFC refrigerant recovery machine and successful
transfer to four local companies
B. Completion of performance evaluation of automobile air-condition
systems and refrigerators with HCFC blends
C. Completion of a feasibility study and computer simulation on replacement
of R-12 by R-134a
D. Development of non-CFC mobile refrigerant technology and its successful
transfer to ABC Corporation
E. Completion of two sessions of non-CFC refrigerant substitution
technology, with 60 attendants
- Foam blowing
A. Completion of a study aimed at replacing CFC-12 with HCFC-22 on
PE/PS foaming
B. Completion of a study of PU integral skin aimed at replacing CFC-11
with HCFC-123 or HCFC-141b
C. Assistance provided to DEF Corporation in their evaluation of the
introduction of HCFC-141b on rigid PU refrigerator foam
- Cleaning
A. Completion of a study of IPC standard tests of electronic test
boards
B. Completion of an evaluation of aqueous, semi-aqueous, and no-cleaning
processes
C. Establishment of a DEMO Center for electronic cleaning to assist
local industry in the evaluation of cleaning effectiveness
D. Successful introduction of a non-cleaning process at five local
electronics plants
E. Successful assistance provided during the introduction of an IPA
cleaning process to an optical lense plant
- Chemical analysis and testing for CFCs
A. Development of analytical methods for analyzing CFC residues found
in foam products
B. Offering of certification services for the export of foam products
C. Development of an analytical technology for refrigerant purity
ITRI's efforts have resulted in a significant ODS phaseout in Taiwan,
with a 30% reduction, in 1992, over that of the base-line consumption
level. Enclosed please find two tables summarizing ITRI's major achievements
in CFC phaseout for the 1993 Fiscal Year (July 1992 to June 1992).
Acknowledgements from the EPA, GHI Corporation, the Tools and Machinery
Association, as well as news clippings on ITRI's related work are
also appended.
In addition to assisting the government in related policies and regulations
(e.g., CFC phaseout strategy, CFC control strategy, and the recycling
and reuse of mobile refrigerant CFC-12), ITRI also took an active
role in organizing Taiwan's Association of Ozone Layer Protection.
In January 1993, the association was established to continue work
on ozone layer protection and to integrate resources from industrial
associations, research institutes, academia and government agencies.
Related international activities
ITRI has also sent delegations
to attend the Montreal Protocol Meetings, where our delegations exchanged
information and established collaborative relations with representatives
from many countries. The R.O.C.'s willingness to participate in global
ozone protection efforts, as well as to comply with the Protocol was
expressed during those meetings.
I hope that this above information clarifies some of our involvements
in the area of ozone layer protection. I would be happy to answer
any questions you might have.
Sincerely,
Writing exercise
Describing current
activities.
Using 1.21 as a model, write a letter describing the current status
of a particular activity in your organization. Be sure to adhere
to the following guidelines:
- Give a brief description
of your organization, including its objectives.
- Describe your organization's
involvement in a particular activity.
- Point to areas of
expected involvement in the future
NOTE:
Reporting
the current status of related activities國內相關成果說明 belongs
to correspondence involving technical cooperation.
Common elements in correspondence
that involves technical cooperation include:
Stating your organization's intention of seeking cooperation
Simply stating the motivation behind your organization's desire
to form a cooperative relationship with another organization helps
avoid future confusion. Examples are provided below:
"I'd like to propose a technological information exchange between
our two organizations regarding environmental pollution prevention-waste
minimization."
"We are seeking potential licensors of the Autoclaved Lightweight
Concrete (ALC) product technology on behalf of local manufacturers
in Taiwan, R.O.C."
"In addition to our in-house R&D, we are also considering the possibility
of technology transfer, from a foreign company, of a technology
that is ready for (or close to) commercialization and that is already
under patent protection."
"We are currently involved in a gear box development program and
are seeking foreign partners who are capable of developing gear
boxes or who can engage in a cooperative technical program with
automotive manufacturers in the R.O.C."
"We are anxious to develop long-lasting cooperative relationships
with manufacturers such as yours."
"We recognize that the continued sucess of our work depends on our
sharing and exchanging experience with similar organizations."
Giving background information about your organization (e.g., mission
,major activities, and achievements)
Providing background information about your organization allows
the other party to know whether your interests and expertise are
compatible with theirs:
"Our organization, Mechanical Industry Research Laboratories (MIRL),
is a subsidiary of the Industrial Technology Research Institute
(ITRI) established by the government of the Republic of China(R.O.C)."
"One of our missions is to aid the local industrial sector by upgrading
technology levels. One of our strategies is to license technology
from abroad."
"The experimental results generated so far in this project have
already been most helpful in Taiwan's environmental protection work."
Providing suggestions on how to initiate cooperation
"I am looking forward to hearing your ideas or suggestions regarding
this information exchange opportunity. I would also like to arrange
for a ten-day technical visit to your organization this upcoming
May as the initial step of our cooperation."
"If you are interested in licensing this technology, please send
the above mentioned information to the above address for evaluation."
"Further discussion, or a possible visit by members of ITRI to your
production facility, would seem to be the appropriate next step."
"I suggest that ABC Corporation send a technical expert to UCL before
the end of July and give a presentation, regarding the product development
of this technology, to our scientists and technical staff."
"Please let me know if there are any areas of common interest you
would like to discuss."
Commending the achievements and reputation of an organization
Sincerely acknowledging or commending the other party's success
in a particular technology expresses your intention to contribute
toward as well as learn from the collaborative relationship:
"Your corporation has a long tradition of providing outstanding
engineering TP (e.g., Noryl) that has various properties and excellent
quality."
"ABC Corporation is recognized as the global leader in developing,
producing and marketing transdermal drug delivery systems."
"ABC's Biotechnology Group has developed some interesting products
that we would like to understand in more detail before reaching
the licensing stage."
"Stat-Rite 2300 is an excellent anti-static polymer that blends
well with other thermoplastics and can be used in ESD applications.
We believe that this permanent anti-static plastic has a strong
market potential, especially in light of the emerging electronics
industry in Taiwan."
Describe the reason(s) for technical cooperation
More than merely attempting to describe your company's interest,
try to outline specific plans or describe what has been achieved
so far:
"A new facility is to be established in Taiwan to design, develop
and produce auto transmission parts. Therefore, we are seeking partners
for technical cooperation through licensing and joint venture agreements."
"We are currently involved in a gear box development program and
are seeking foreign partners who are capable of developing gear
boxes or who can engage in a cooperative technical program with
automotive manufacturers in the R.O.C.
Additional instruction can be found in the accompanying Power Point presentation.
Further practice can be found in A Correspondence Manual for Chinese Technical Writers by Ted Knoy.