Class Five Use Verbs Instead of Nouns 動詞代替名詞 (Exercises 8 to 11)
( Exercises 8 to 11 beginning on page 54 in An Editing Workbook for Chinese Technical Writers by Ted Knoy )

句子冗贅的原因也可能是使用太多的名詞,通常這些名詞是由動詞轉化來的,而結果是使動詞更無力,此部份會在第四單元詳論。此外,過份的濫用名詞也帶來了多餘的介係詞。


[ Exercise 8 ]

  1. Difficulty is encountered in explanation of the method to inexperienced engineers owing to its computational complexity.
  2. Simulation of the program is performed in this study.
  3. A slight increase occurs in the deposition rate.
  4. Knowledge of how the variables are distributed is not re- quired by novice engineers
  5. Not only is the variability of the control factors considered by the proposed procedure, but implementation of related tasks is performed by that same procedure.
  6. A recommendation of using iterative least squares (ILS) as a simple method for analysis of censored data was made by Schmee and Hahn (1990).
  7. Normalization of operations is achieved by a simple calculation of the scores.
  8. Improvement of the condition is achieved by variation of the control factors
  9. A recommendation is made here that the program be simulated by the engineer.
  10. The operator made a reservation of the ticket for me.
  11. The system performs an assignment of the weights to the variables.
  12. The next phase performed an examination of the unknown factors.
  13. Assessment of a student's willingness to study by an instructor is possible through the closely examination of his or her academic performance.
  14. Solution of environmental problems is heavily dependent on responsiveness of the local community to governmental legislation.
  15. Promulgation of accurate information to the public can not be done by conventional approaches.

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[ Exercise 9 ]

  1. A comparison is made of the advantages and disadvantages of the methods in this study so that the appropriate one can be selected.
  2. A thorough review of linear estimation methods was made in their investigation so that life data could be understood.
  3. Comprehension of the maximum likelihood method is difficult for engineers with limited statistical training.
  4. Computational simplicity of the linear estimation methods compared with the MLE methods is apparent.
  5. Consideration of the interaction and variability of variables is not made by the conventional approach.
  6. Identification and assessment of several models is possible.
  7. Promulgation and verification of the accreditation standards is impossible.
  8. This cycle is continued with until fluctuation of the selected model stops.
  9. An evaluation of their adequacy can be made with the proposed scheme.
  10. Reduction of the task complexity is achieved by application of the nonparametric technique to industrial settings.
  11. Only those factors having significant effects on the response average are identified by the proposed procedure so that unreplicated experiments can be interpreted
  12. Selection is made of the optimal levels by experienced engineers for the factors having significant effects on the response average and standard deviation.
  13. A serious limitation on the effectiveness of the current system are caused by user demand.
  14. Creation of new genes is possible by innovative technologists
  15. The requirement that ID cards must be shown by students when entering the library is stipulated by school policy.

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[ Exercise 10 ]

  1. Determination of the MRSN ratio is possible through the integration of the quality loss for all responses.
  2. Optimization of the multi-response problems in the Taguchi method is achieved in this work by the procedure proposed herein.
  3. Dissemination of imprecise information can not be effectively done by the conventional MADM methods.
  4. Constraints on the fuzzy MADM approaches are imposed by cumbersome computation.
  5. Conversion of fuzzy data into crisp scores is achieved in the first phase.
  6. The fact that the attributes must be numerical and comparable is stipulated by TOPSIS.
  7. The relative closeness computed in TOPSIS can be used as a performance assessment of multi-response problems in the Taguchi method.
  8. Measurement of each response must be carefully made by the standard.
  9. Systematic optimization of the problem is the focus of this section.
  10. Determination from the experience of an engineer shows how much pressure is affected by time.
  11. Further analysis of the facility is necessary for the practitioner to make an adjustment of the parameter settings.
  12. Minimization of A and B levels can be achieved by setting factors A and B at A2.

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[ Exercise 11 ]

  1. How to adjust the multiple settings of the process parameters was outside of the knowledge of the engineers.
  2. Standardization of the accreditation procedures was achieved by the committee.
  3. For optimization of the conditions for robust design problems, the applicability of a novel approach is performed in this study.
  4. An experiment of the PCVD process in the IC manufacturing field is required of the engineer.
  5. Significant contributions by the proposed procedure are made to the manufacturing sector.
  6. Transformation of the structure is achieved by strict control of the variables.
  7. A conclusion is made in this study that it is necessary for the parameters to be varied by the engineer to ensure that the operations are effectively controlled by the system.
  8. An assessment of the proposed method in this section is made so that accurate data can be ensured.
  9. Complexity of the computational process is increased by their approach.
  10. Described in the following section is how implementation of the control factor is achieved by the proposed scheme.
  11. No significant effect on the mean response is made by the factor.
  12. Assessment of the product's reliability is made by the practitioner is achieved through means of compilation of the statistics.

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